A类5.5分雅思剑桥6Test2小作文
摘要:批改ByWill本次批改严格按照ILETS小作文评分标准进行。ILETS小作文评分项:TA(内容的完整性),CC(连贯性及一致性),GRA(语法范围及精准度),LR(词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。作文题目学生原文ThetableillustratestheinformationaboutthechangesoftheaveragedistanceinmileseveryoneinEnglandover75years.Thelargestdatafoundintableistheaveragedistanceoflocalbusin2000,whichwas4806.ItmeansthattheaveragedistanceoflocalExperiencedadrasticallyupwardby707miles.Ontheotherhand,theaveragedistanceoftaxirankedlast1985and2000,butinincreasedfrom13milesin1985to42milesin2000.Theaveragedistanceofwalkingandbicycleshowedaslightdecline,droppingmodestlyof12milesand10milesrespectively.Inthecontrast,thereisanoticeableleapfoundinlocalbus,andtheaveragedistancein2000is155mileslessthantheaveragedi
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